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Keloni Tortue

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Here she is!
Tried out the clipping group tool on SAI to color the lineart. It makes the colors look a lot smoother. uwu

Info:
Name: Keloni Tortue
Age: 7 Alternian Solar sweeps
Blood Color: Violet
Height: 5ft.
Weight: 122lbs.
Lusus: (Hawksbill) Sea turtle
Trolltag: ambrosialArchivist [AA]
Quirk: o(#)- STaRTs wiTh a LiTTLE TURTLE EmoTE. CapiTaLizEs T, U, R, L, and E. (Makes it seem like she's really excited about turtles when she says the word. xD)
Title: Mage of Space
Strife Specibus: Bowkind (uses a golden bow with jewels on it and strong, reinforced string. And, arrows with curled plastic fletching)
Relations:
♥ Matesprit - N/A
♦ Moirail - (Fantroll has yet to be named, but can be found here: anonymouskingii.deviantart.com… )
♣ Auspistice - N/A
♠ Kismesis - N/A
Ancestor: The Overseer
Dancestor: Tavele Tortue
Theme song: (Also headcanon voice) www.youtube.com/watch?v=TpUP0j…

EDIT: This dear is up for sale as I don't use her much anymore and I need some money. Just let me know if you'd like to buy her before you click the purchase button. Thank you~
This babe has been bought and now belongs to Oblivious-to-4ever!
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bluekitsvne's avatar
the arrows should still have feathers, especially if she ever hopes to use it above water. plastic fletching would be your best bet, perhaps fletching that's curled over just a bit at the top. that may help it fly through water and air with more accuracy. source: i'm an archer :P
other than that, i would suggest something a bit different about her quirk, the capitalising all the letters of a certain word is kind of... weird to read, and somewhat common? replacing that with something related to her interests, or along those lines, would be a good idea. lastly, lusii are usually two steps away from reality. for example, karkat's crabdad is a crab (reality) who is anthropomorphic (step 1) and huge (step 2). so spicing up her lusus would be a great idea as well~
and just to make sure, trolls dont actually know what mom or dad means so she wouldn't say turtlemom :)
she is a very neat looking fantroll though! dont forget to add interests and her land. it should be Land of ____ and Frogs, as she's a space hero.